Our Chosen Ident

The ident we have chosen for the opening sequence. We had 4 rough draft idents and originally we had chosen one with a soundtrack attached, then during feedback from our teacher she brought to our attention that the convention of an ident is sound that match what is happening and its very rare to have no-diegetic music happening.

Changes and Comments After Audience Feedback

After looking over the audience feedback we received today, we have decided that the blood title sequence which we weren’t sure on keeping, we are now because everyone comments on how effective they thought it was, the only change we need to make is slowing it down. We have changed the ident to a completely different design which we all thought was more effective, we are now reviewing the fighting shots we used because we had many comments on the effect of them, For Example that it wasn’t realistic so we are going to discuss how we plan to change that. We have now got the composed music piece and that has now been added in, so the comments on the silence should now be irrelevant. We are also going to have a detailed discussion on how we can show the plot easier because we received a few comments from people saying the didn’t get it and they were confused. We have also repeated the 'keyhole' scene again to show the ending because again we were told they didnt understand that it was over. 
Over all we received good and helpful criticism that we are now going to work on to make our opening sequence more effective.

Audience Feedback

Below if the feedback we recieved today after showing the class the rough draft of our opening sequcence

First Draft Of Main Task opening sequence

Film Schedule Interview