Research Roles after Shooting Script Feedback

After reviewing our shooting script feedback our group decided what we needed more research on to make our film an effective thriller.
We decided:
Me - Mis-en-scene
Becky - Sound
Beth C - Lighting
Beth S - Titles

Shooting Script Feedback

Shooting Script Feedback

Shooting Script

This is our very frist draft of our shooting script, we will now print copies to each group in our media class and ask for feedback on any details we have lacked and need to add, or what details were particually effective.

 

Audience feedback

Age 12a Certificate: Mature themes expected, Nudity is allowed, but in a sexual context it must be brief and discreet, The use of strong language  must be infrequent,Sexual activity may be implied. Sex references may reflect what is likely to be familiar to most adolescents but should not go beyond what is suitable for them. Violence must not dwell on detail. There should be no emphasis on injuries or blood. Sexual violence may only be implied or briefly and discreetly indicated. Dangerous techniques (eg combat, hanging, suicide and self-harming) should not dwell on imitable detail or appear pain or harm free. Easily accessible weapons should not be glamorised.


Age 15 Certificate: strong violence, requent strong language, portrayals of sexual activity, strong verbal references to sex, sexual nudity, brief scenes of sexual violence or verbal references to sexual violence, discriminatory language or behaviour, drug taking


Age 18 Certificate: very strong violence, frequent strong language (eg 'f***') and/or very strong language (eg ‘c***’), strong portrayals of sexual activity, scenes of sexual violence, strong horror, strong blood and gore, real sex (in some circumstances), discriminatory language and behaviour

Our Film requires strong violence, brief scenes of domestic abuse for this our film needs the rating of the age 15.

How We are Going to Targert our Audience

We are going to keep the audience intrested by leaving the audience asking questions and using the thriller techniques such as flashbacks and quick cut to keep the attention alert and wanting more.

Revisions after receiving feedback

we are planing on keeping our idea and narrative the same bacause most of the audience feedback we recived was positive and all our audience agreed the plot fit into the sub-genre and the narative was good and left them asking questions