After reviewing our shooting script feedback our group decided what we needed more research on to make our film an effective thriller.
We decided:
Me - Mis-en-scene
Becky - Sound
Beth C - Lighting
Beth S - Titles
Thursday, 29 November 2012
Shooting Script
This is our very frist draft of our shooting script, we will now print copies to each group in our media class and ask for feedback on any details we have lacked and need to add, or what details were particually effective.
Monday, 26 November 2012
Audience feedback
Age 12a Certificate: Mature themes expected, Nudity is allowed, but in a sexual context it must be brief and discreet, The use of strong language must be infrequent,Sexual activity may be implied. Sex references may reflect what is likely to be familiar to most adolescents but should not go beyond what is suitable for them. Violence must not dwell on detail. There should be no emphasis on injuries or blood. Sexual violence may only be implied or briefly and discreetly indicated. Dangerous techniques (eg combat, hanging, suicide and self-harming) should not dwell on imitable detail or appear pain or harm free. Easily accessible weapons should not be glamorised.
Age 15 Certificate: strong violence, requent strong language, portrayals of sexual activity, strong verbal references to sex, sexual nudity, brief scenes of sexual violence or verbal references to sexual violence, discriminatory language or behaviour, drug taking
Age 18 Certificate: very strong violence, frequent strong language (eg 'f***') and/or very strong language (eg ‘c***’), strong portrayals of sexual activity, scenes of sexual violence, strong horror, strong blood and gore, real sex (in some circumstances), discriminatory language and behaviour
Our Film requires strong violence, brief scenes of domestic abuse for this our film needs the rating of the age 15.
Friday, 23 November 2012
How We are Going to Targert our Audience
We are going to keep the audience intrested by leaving the audience asking questions and using the thriller techniques such as flashbacks and quick cut to keep the attention alert and wanting more.
Revisions after receiving feedback
we are planing on keeping our idea and narrative the same bacause most of the audience feedback we recived was positive and all our audience agreed the plot fit into the sub-genre and the narative was good and left them asking questions
Audience Feedback Of Our Pitch
Is The Plot effective? Yes, a little unclear but well thought out story line.
Does the plot link to the sub-genre?Yes because of the detective, crime thriller is Cleary shown
Would this storyline be something you would watch?Yes it’s very detailed and no because it isn’t in my demographic of film
With This Feedback We have taken these coments on board and taken in to consideration of how much detail we are going to include in our opening sequence. And that we need to simplify the narative to make it clearer to the audience.
What did you think of the narrative?Good but a little confusing and created a lot of questions
Does the plot link to the sub-genre?Yes because of the detective, crime thriller is Cleary shown
Would this storyline be something you would watch?Yes it’s very detailed and no because it isn’t in my demographic of film
Did the Plot grasp your attention?Yes
What could be improved?Simplify it a little and give less information away
Is there enough information planned to be given in the opening sequence?yes but many give less away to keep asking questionsWith This Feedback We have taken these coments on board and taken in to consideration of how much detail we are going to include in our opening sequence. And that we need to simplify the narative to make it clearer to the audience.
Our Pitch Presentation
Discussion Prior to our Pitch:
The narrative will be introduced by using short quick cuts- this will show a little of the plot without giving much away.
Show genre is crime because were showing a murder.
Representations: white to show innocence
detective - clothing and weapons
black for death
the opening will show little shows ending in a murder and leave questions.
Sunday, 11 November 2012
Title Sequences I Disliked
Wall-E & Planet Of The Apes
-Both Were Boring and i lost intrest
-Didnt Set the Narative
-Music used was dull - Not appealing
-Both Were Boring and i lost intrest
-Didnt Set the Narative
-Music used was dull - Not appealing
Title Sequences I Liked
Casino Royale
Colour Contrast-
Black and White Then Shot gun Red
Music is upbeat -Shows Pace and Energy of Film
Sets Narative/ Location
-Not just name of film
Suits of cards show in title Sequence
Title Sequences I Liked
Uses both animation and Real Life
-Enthesizes the age of the Girl and Sets up Narative
Up Beat Music
Title Sequences Techniques I liked
Romeo And Juliet
Left Asking Questions
Dramatic Music Keeping Audience Alert
Sets Up Narative
Keeps The Audience InticedLeft Asking Questions
Dramatic Music Keeping Audience Alert
Techniques of Title Openings I Liked
21 Jump StreetUp Beat Music in Background
Bold Use Of Colour
Sets up Narative a Little
Leaves you Asking Questions
Wanting to Continue Viewing
Energetic- Keeps the View Intersted
Bold Use Of Colour
Sets up Narative a Little
Leaves you Asking Questions
Wanting to Continue Viewing
Energetic- Keeps the View Intersted
Title Opening What I Need To Consider
During My Opening Sequence I Need To Ensure I:
-Capture the audiences attension
-Keep a balance between simple and intreqing and leave them asking questions
-Use fitting Music in Background
-Simple font
-Not using bold colours using colours to signal genre - eg. Thriller- Dark
-Set the genre
-Challange or confirm to convections of genre
-Situation or not (action and titles)
-theme
-transition
-postioning of text and speed
-Capture the audiences attension
-Keep a balance between simple and intreqing and leave them asking questions
-Use fitting Music in Background
-Simple font
-Not using bold colours using colours to signal genre - eg. Thriller- Dark
-Set the genre
-Challange or confirm to convections of genre
-Situation or not (action and titles)
-theme
-transition
-postioning of text and speed
Friday, 9 November 2012
Opening Titles Research
Ive been viewing opening titles of films to identify the techniques i like and would use on my main task and the techniques i want to avoid using.
Techniques i liked: 21 Jump Street
-Up-beat music and bold use of colour
-Sets up narrative colour
-Energetic and keeps the audience interested.
Techniques i liked: 21 Jump Street
-Up-beat music and bold use of colour
-Sets up narrative colour
-Energetic and keeps the audience interested.
Thursday, 8 November 2012
Things to Consider in My Opening Titles
-Make sure you capture the audiences attention
-Keep a balance between simple and challenging to keep the audience asking questions
-Use Fitting music and sound in the background
-use Simple, Netural font -Dont use bold colours -
Use Black and white
-Make sure to singal genre
-Challenge or conform to convetions of genre
-Situation or not (action behind the titles)
-Use of colours to show genre- Crime thriller -Dark colours
-Consider aproprate theme
-Use of transitions and sound
-Postioning of text and the speed.
-Keep a balance between simple and challenging to keep the audience asking questions
-Use Fitting music and sound in the background
-use Simple, Netural font -Dont use bold colours -
Use Black and white
-Make sure to singal genre
-Challenge or conform to convetions of genre
-Situation or not (action behind the titles)
-Use of colours to show genre- Crime thriller -Dark colours
-Consider aproprate theme
-Use of transitions and sound
-Postioning of text and the speed.
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