Audience Feedback Of Our Pitch

Is The Plot effective? Yes, a little unclear but well thought out story line.

What did you think of the narrative?Good but a little confusing and created a lot of questions

Does the plot link to the sub-genre?Yes because of the detective, crime thriller is Cleary shown

Would this storyline be something you would watch?Yes it’s very detailed and no because it isn’t in my demographic of film

Did the Plot grasp your attention?Yes

What could be improved?Simplify it a little and give less information away

Is there enough information planned to be given in the opening sequence?yes but many give less away to keep asking questions



With This Feedback We have taken these coments on board and taken in to consideration of how much detail we are going to include in our opening sequence. And that we need to simplify the narative to make it clearer to the audience.